I've had a blast writing it. Frankly, I don't know why I have waited so long to do so. In essence, this novel is a lover-letter to my high school youth group, to its leaders, and to the whole experience of the weekend retreat. In some sense, the work also serves also something of an apology letter to several young ladies whose attendance at said retreats was complicated by my unwelcome romantic pursuits and gestures. Names have been changed to protect the innocent, and I have spread my own loathsome proclivities over a number of different characters of either gender. I've tweeted about the process of writing this book--the re-opening of old wounds to pull meaningful and deep emotional moments and also the joys of doing so, being removed from them as I am these days.
Strangegly, however, I have not touched on one of the most fulfilling aspect of this latest process. I think it's because I'm somewhat embarrassed to have come to this realization so late in my writing career (novice, though it is). I am referring to a means of organizing data and subplots at the outline stage of the story by color-coding arcs and conflicts. I cannot believe how much easier it is to track subplots or story threads when they are designated by color. It makes them pop throughout an outline, shows their constancy (or lack thereof) throughout the storyline, and In the end, provides a wonderful tapestry for the work, making it feel dynamic and complex, despite how intentionally straightforward the plot design is. As an example, I am going to provide you with two portions from my outline, one with color coding, one without. Please note that everything presented here is in shorthand as this comes from the outline, and the final, actual text will have more meat to it. =)
- The group arrives at the campground, and an encounter occurs between Ryan and Michelle. He grabs her bag and takes it for her (all the guys do this for all the ladies, but he looks for hers). She wants to focus on God and friends, and she is both obtuse and uninterested in him, though she has some level of odd attraction.
- Brian makes the boys grab the women’s luggage.
- Julia comments to this effect.
- Tom tries to grab it but Ryan Thwarts him.
- Ryan returns, also grabs Leanne’s bag also
- Charity watches. Reaches out to Michelle
- Ryan and Kenneth comedic encounter 1
- The youth attend their first service, during which Ryan is undeterred in his interest. HIn fact, his opinion for her only increases. And he sits near Michelle but next to her. The speaker calls to the students to join the “Eternal Romance”.
- Brian sits with arm around Cindy. Had Held.
- Julia sits next to Ryan
- Tom sits by Michelle. K on other side. Paige sits next to him.
- Leanne sits on other side of Ryan
- Charity sits behind Michelle
- The group arrives at the
campground, and an encounter occurs between Ryan and Michelle. He grabs
her bag and takes it for her (all the guys do this for all the ladies, but
he looks for hers). She wants to focus on God and friends, and she is both
obtuse and uninterested in him, though she has some level of odd
attraction.
- Brian
makes the boys grab the women’s luggage.
- Julia
comments to this effect.
- Tom tries
to grab it but Ryan Thwarts him.
- Ryan
returns, also grabs Leanne’s bag also
- Charity
watches. Reaches out to Michelle
- Ryan and
Kenneth comedic encounter 1
- The youth attend their first service, during
which Ryan is undeterred in his interest. HIn fact, his opinion for her
only increases. And he sits near Michelle but next to her. The speaker
calls to the students to join the “Eternal Romance”.
- Brian
sits with arm around Cindy. Had Held.
- Julia sits
next to Ryan
- Tom sits by Michelle. K on other side. Paige sits next to him.
- Leanne sits
on other side of Ryan
- Charity sits behind Michelle
Thanks for reading,
C
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